My favorite mobile game
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite mobile game is \'Kart Rider Rush Plus\' because when I\'m racing very fast in the game that gives me a big thrill and there are also so many kinds of cars. Among those cars, I especially like Black Knight GT the most because it looks really cool and it is high powered car.
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HOMEWORK:
My favorite mobile game is \'Kart Rider Rush Plus\' because when I\'m
racing very fast in the game that gives me a big thrill and there are
also so many kinds of cars. Among those cars, I especially like Black
Knight GT the most because it looks really cool and it is high powered
car.
>> My favorite mobile game is \'Kart Rider Rush Plus\' because when I\'m
racing very fast in the game, it gives me a big thrill and there are
also so many kinds of cars. Among those cars, I especially like Black
Knight GT the most because it looks really cool and it is a high powered
car.
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