My favorite month
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My favorite month is March. The first reason is that my birthday is in March. I can get many gifts from my family and my friends. Secondly the weather is good. It is a little cold as well as very cool so I don’t need to sweat. Lastly we start new grade in March so I could meet new friends and teachers
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Hi [이름]!
See you in our class ^^
T. DON
>> My favorite month is March. The first reason is that my birthday is
in March. I can get many gifts from my family and my friends. Secondly
the weather is good. It is a little cold as well as very cool so I don’t
need to sweat. Lastly we start our new school year in March so I could meet new
friends and teachers
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