My favorite month
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This year my favorite month is September. The main reason is because we have long Chuseok holiday so I don’ have to go to school for five days in a row. It feels like I have another vacation. Besides, September is that winter vacation is less than three months away. Lastly, l love the mild weather with a clear blue sky of September.
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Happy Friday!
T. DON
This year my favorite month is September. The main reason is because we
have long Chuseok holiday so I don’ have to go to school for five days
in a row. It feels like I have another vacation. Besides, September is
that winter vacation is less than three months away. Lastly, l love the
mild weather with a clear blue sky of September.
>> This year, my favorite month is September. The main reason is because we
have long Chuseok holiday so I don’ have to go to school for five days
in a row. It feels like I have another vacation. Besides, September is less than three months away from winter vacation. Lastly, l love the
mild weather with a clear blue sky of September.
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