My favorite movie
학생이 쓴 원문
My favoite movie genre is fantasy because I love the virtual world that I can\'t do in real life.
So I love HarryPotter, MARVEL and japanese animations.
A real life is so cruel but virtual world can all anything.
Like flying person, the witch, and spell etc.
Sometimes I want to be one of virtual character.
Then I can anything.
So I\'m satisfied on fantasy movie.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]na,
Movies are a great resource for visual learners because they enable them to understand concepts without the barriers that hinder learning. Just like books, movies allow students insight into the lives of different characters, how their perspective differs and how they [이름]dle certain situations. Enjoy watching movies.\" ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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My favoite movie genre is fantasy because I love the virtual world that I can\'t do in real life.
>> My favorite movie genre is fantasy because I love the virtual world that I can\'t do in real life.
So I love HarryPotter, MARVEL and japanese animations.
>> So I love Harry Potter, MARVEL, and Japanese animation movies.
A real life is so cruel but virtual world can all anything.
>> A real-life is so cruel but a virtual world can do all anything.
Like flying person, the witch, and spell etc.
>> Like a flying person, the witch, magic spell, etc.
Sometimes I want to be one of virtual character.
>> Sometimes I want to be one of the virtual characters in a movie.
Then I can anything.
>> Then I can do anything.
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My favoite movie genre is fantasy because I love the virtual world that I can\'t do in real life.
So I love HarryPotter, MARVEL and japanese animations.
A real life is so cruel but virtual world can all anything.
Like flying person, the witch, and spell etc.
Sometimes I want to be one of virtual character.
Then I can anything.
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