my favorite movie
학생이 쓴 원문
my favorite movie is ‘The Greatest Showman’. It’s a kind of musical movie. Honestly, I can’t say the movie’s story is well-made. but there are good songs in the movie. Especially, the song named ‘This is me’ is one of my favorite songs. the song says no matter how you are different than other people, I am me. So whenever I’m depressed, I listen to this song to make my feeling better. In addition to this song, other songs also have good meaning and lyrics. that’s why I like this movie and its songs.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jade! I think I\'d agree with your opinion when it comes to this movie. The songs are indeed amazing! Thank you for answering this homework! See you soon!
~~Teacher Ryka^^
>> My favorite movie is \"The Greatest Showman.\"
It’s a kind of musical movie.
>> It\'s kind of a musical movie.
Honestly, I can’t say the movie’s story is well-made.
>> Honestly, I can\'t say the storyline was well-made.
but there are good songs in the movie.
>> But the movie has good songs.
Especially, the song named ‘This is me’ is one of my favorite songs.
>> One of my favorite songs from the movie is the song entitled, \"This is me\"
the song says no matter how you are different than other people, I am me.
>> The songs portrays that even if you are different from other people, you\'d always be unique.
So whenever I’m depressed, I listen to this song to make my feeling better.
>> So when I\'m depressed, I listen to this song to make me feel better.
In addition to this song, other songs also have good meaning and lyrics.
>> Other than this song, the others also have good meanings and lyrics.
that’s why I like this movie and its songs.
>> That\'s why I like this movie and its songs.
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