My favorite movie

2012-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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It was hard to select my favorite movie because I like movies and watched a lot of movies. So I hardly selected it as “Love Actually”. It was made in 2003 and It was very popular in the world. There are many couples in the movie and they love each other in their own ways. They love even if they can’t speak the same language. A men say “I love you” even if he never can’t get her love. They love even if they have different skin colors. I feel happy watching it. I’d like to you see that movei if you don’t it yet.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It is so nice to see how you share your thoughts about your favorite movie. Oh, I have watched the movie, Love Actually few years ago. It's a movie about different love stories where we could really relate to some of them. That's why it's good to watch especially for us, ladies. Continue expressing your thoughts and ideas in writing, [이름]. Good job! See you later!  ~Teacher Alice It was hard to select my favorite movie because I like movies and watched a lot of movies. >> It was hard to choose my favorite movie because I like watching movies. So I hardly selected it as “Love Actually”. It was made in 2003 and It was very popular in the world. >> I chose \"Love Actually\". It was made in 2003 and was a very popular movie. >> OR I chose the movie, Love Actually, which was released in 2003 and was a very popular movie. There are many couples in the movie and they love each other in their own ways. >> There were many couples in the movie who love each other in their own ways. They love even if they can’t speak the same language. >> Each couple still loves each other despite their differences. A men say “I love you” even if he never can’t get her love. >> A man would say his love to a girl even if she couldn't give her love back. They love even if they have different skin colors. >> They love each other despite their race differences. I feel happy watching it. >> I feel happy whenever I watch it. I’d like to you see that movei if you don’t it yet. >>I\'d like you to see the movie if you haven\'t seen it yet.    

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