My favorite movie

My favorite genre of movie is action movie. Whenever I feel bored of my life , I would like to watch action movie. I also like a romantic comedy movie. the best movie in my life is the film entitled "the escape from the prison Shasank" This movie was so moving. There was a main actor who was falsely accused of killing his wife. He was sent to the prison. Since he was a bank clerk before, the head chief of prison had him do accounting. He had to fabricate many accounting to reduce taxes. As time went by , he realized there was no way to get out of the prison without escaing. so He decided to escape and succeeded. My favorite scene is that he was standing in the pouring rain just after escaping.

Hi there [이름]! I tried searching for the movie that you said and I came across the movie "Shawshank Redemption"... Is that it? Anyway, I'll talk to you tomorrow. -Teacher JM-   My favorite genre of movie is action movie.>>>Correct. >>Better: Action is my favorite genre in movies.Whenever I feel bored of my life , I would like to watch action movie.>>>Whenever I feel bored, I would watch an action movie.I also like a romantic comedy movie.>>>I also like romantic comedy movies. (plural because you are referring to a group)the best movie in my life is the film entitled "the escape from the prison Shasank">>>Correct--but I think the real title of the movie is "Shawshank redemption"This movie was so moving.>>>Correct!!There was a main actor who was falsely accused of killing his wife.>>>Correct. >>Better: The main actor was falsely accused of killing his wife.He was sent to the prison.>>>Correct. Better( to add consistency in telling the story) He was then sent to prison.Since he was a bank clerk before, the head chief of prisonhad him do accounting.>>>Since he was a bank clerk, the chief of prison had him do accounting.He had to fabricate many accounting to reduce taxes.>>>He had to fabricate the accounting to reduce the total tax.As time went by , he realized there was no way to get out of the prison without escaing.>>>As time went by , he realized that there was no way to get out of prison without escaping.so He decided to escape and succeeded.>>>Correct!!My favorite scene is that he was standing in the pouring rainjust after escaping. >>>My favorite scene is when he was standing outside in the pouring rain just after escaping.