My favorite movie

2018-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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I like favorite movie is \'Cinema paradiso\'. Images from the movie still lingers in my mind. Toto, the main character of the movie, has a passion for the movie and can not forget its mischievous and lovable eyes. In addition, the friendship between Alfredo the projectionist and little Toto was touching, and the pain of love Toto suffered as he grew up was also sympathetic. Above all, the best of this movie were beautiful music and visual.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]!

Wow, you told me that you weren\'t able to do your homework, but you just did it! Thank you so much for sharing your favorite movie. It seems like a sad movie though. Great work! See you.

~Teacher Eunice


I like favorite movie is \'Cinema paradiso\'.
>>> My
favorite movie is \'Cinema paradiso\'. 

Images from the movie still lingers in my mind.
>>> Correct!
Toto, the main character of the movie, has a passion for the movie and can not forget its mischievous and lovable eyes. 

>>> Toto, the main character of the movie, has a passion for movies and I can not forget his mischievous and lovable eyes.  

In addition, the friendship between Alfredo the projectionist and little Toto was touching, and the pain of love  as he grew up was also sympathetic
>>> In addition, the friendship between Alfredo the projectionist and little Toto was touching, and
Toto had suffered from the pain of love, as he grew up  sympathetically.
Above all, the best of this movie were beautiful music and visual.

>>> Above all, the best part of this movie was the beautiful music and pictures.

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