My favorite movie is \"Mission impossible\"
학생이 쓴 원문
\"Mission impossible\" is about the man, and the girl\'s clearing the mission story. There is a bomb release mission, and saving a person mission. I see this movie with a nervous heart. You maybe know this movie, because this movie is very famous. Actor who act this man\'s name is Tom Cruise. He\'s act was very awesome. If you didn\'t know this movie, I recommend to you. If you see this, you will say \"wow\" I conviction it.
\"Mission impossible\" give very important things to me. That is \"Nothing is impossible\". I love this movie.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Maria!
I agree that all of the Mission Impossible movies are spectacular and worth your money. Actually, this year if we are lucky, the next installment of the Mission Impossible film will be released. I cannot wait to watch it!
I felt adrenalin rush reading your essay. Keep up the good work and see you soon.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Mission Impossible
There is a bomb release mission, and saving a person mission. I see this movie with a nervous heart.
>> There was a bomb released in the mission, and saving a person too. I saw this movie with a nervous heart.
You maybe know this movie, because this movie is very famous. Actor who act this man\'s name is Tom Cruise.
>> You maybe know this movie because it is very famous. The actor who acted on this film is Tom Cruise.
He\'s act was very awesome. If you didn\'t know this movie, I recommend to you. If you see this, you will say \"wow\" I conviction it.
>> His acting was very awesome. If you don\'t know this movie, I recommend it to you. If you saw this, you will say \"wow\" with conviction.
\"Mission impossible\" give very important things to me. That is \"Nothing is impossible\". I love this movie.
>> Correct!
Or: Mission Impossible
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