My Favorite Music
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently, I became interested in a song. That song is \"Love Dive\". It\'s a popular song that sung by korean girl group, IVE. It was released last August. It is a song about a narcissist, it says to us \"We should love us\". Many people in korea like the song, so IVE won many awards.
I hope they sing great songs for a long time.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] U!
Thanks for sharing about the music you like, I will listen to this song. :D
Anyways, thanks for answering your homework! See you later~
-T.Jhozel
Recently, I became interested in a song.
>> Correct!
That song is \"Love Dive\".
>> The title of the song is \"Love Dive\"
It\'s a popular song that sung by korean girl group, IVE.
>> It\'s a popular song by the Korean girl group IVE.
It was released last August.
>> It was released in August of this year.
It is a song about a narcissist, it says to us \"We should love us\".
>> Correct!
Many people in korea like the song, so IVE won many awards.
>> Because the song is popular in Korea, IVE received numerous awards.
I hope they sing great songs for a long time.
>> I hope they continue to perform great songs for a long time.
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