My favorite music

2010-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

I used to listen pop songs, because I like it rather than korean music. Among them, I like The fray and Backstreet boys. Because their songs are easy to listen and are made up with beautiful melody. Do you know 'Over my head'??, it is my favorite song.I like it very much,it is easy to follow singing, nice lyrics and good voice of singer. Whenever I confront with problems, I say 'over my head',because that problem was over my head and sing a song. Although this song isn't the latest music, it is my best song to me until now.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I don’t know this song but I’m a little bit curious so I’ll check it out in you tube later. I’m song I’m going to like it, too. Haha. See you tonight J --Connie--   I used to listen pop songs, because I like it rather than korean music. >> I use to listen to pop songs, because I like it rather than Korean music. Among them, I like The fray and Backstreet boys. Because their songs are easy to listen and are made up with beautiful melody. >> Among them, I like “The fray and Backstreet boys” because their songs are easy to listen and it is made up of beautiful melody. Do you know 'Over my head'??, it is my favorite song.I like it very much,it is easy to follow singing, nice lyrics and good voice of singer. >> Do you know “Over my head?”, it is my favorite song. I like it very much, it is easy to follow it has nice lyrics and the singer has a good voice. lWhenever I confront with problems, I say 'over my head',because that problem was over my head and sing a song. >> Whenever I encounter problems I always listen to that song because my problem is just perfectly over my head. Although this song isn't the latest music, it is my best song to me until now. >> Although this song isn’t the latest song, it is still the best for me.

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