My favorite music.

2010-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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My favorite music is ballad music. I like it because I hate noisy music. Since I have my own car, I usually listen to music in the car. or on my way commuting back and forth. My favorite singer is "Michael Jackson" Though he died, I believe that his music will last forever. When I listen to a music, I sing along to it or dance to it. It helps me to get rid of the stress I got during the day.

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Hi [이름]!! I hope you're having a wonderful time today! Here are the corrections of your composition: My favorite music is ballad music.>> My favorite music is ballad.I like it because I hate noisy music.>> I like it because it's soothing. Since I have my own car, I usually listen to music in the car.>> I love listening to music in my car.or on my way commuting back and forth.>> while driving to and from / back and forth from my destination.My favorite singer is "Michael Jackson">>My favorite singer is Michael JacksonThough he died, I believe that his music will last forever.>> Even if he's already gone, I believe that his music will last forever.When I listen to a music, I sing along to it or dance to it.>> I sing and dance along with the music I listen to.It helps me to get rid of the stress I got during the day. >> It helps me get rid of stress during the day. Enjoy listening to your music [이름]!!

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