My favorite music genre
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m crazy in Rock\'n Roll music!
I\'m used to listen rock music since middle school student.
At that time I had a dream that I would visit rock music festivals in Korea.
Nowadays I enjoy rock music festivals as much as possible because the COVID-19 pandemic almost ends.
I already booked tickets of rock music festivals on August and October!
I really expect to enjoy those festivals.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
You have mentioned that you love music before but knowing that you love rock and roll is very interesting. I think we could agree that rock and roll music is the best. ^^
You started at a young age in appreciating this music. I wonder how many concerts you have watched. It is good to look forward to more rocking moments as you have already grabbed your tickets for the co[이름]g months.
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-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or; I\'m crazy for rock and roll music.
I\'m used to listen rock music since middle school student.
I\'m used to listen rock music since middle school student.
>> I\'m used to listening to rock music since I was a middle school student.
At that time I had a dream that I would visit rock music festivals in Korea.
>> At that time I had a dream that I would visit a rock music festivals in Korea.
Nowadays I enjoy rock music festivals as much as possible because the COVID-19 pandemic almost ends.
Nowadays I enjoy rock music festivals as much as possible because the COVID-19 pandemic almost ends.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!
I already booked tickets of rock music festivals on August and October!
>> Correct!
I really expect to enjoy those festivals.
>> Correct!
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