My favorite music type.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite music type is ballad. When i want to take some rest or feel tired, l usually listen to ballad. Because that music type is not noisy and not making me confuse. Actually i like listening to active music. But when my condition is not good, the ballad is the best. through this, l can make my feeling good. Nowadays l think the Rap is also good genre. When l was elementary school student, l thought that is too fast to understand. But ater being middle school student, l c[이름]ged my tought. It was fun enough to enjoy with my friends. And also l like to try other music types.
Ms. [Name] you next friday!
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Stella ^^
T[이름]k you for writing your homework! Enjoy your vacation!
See you on Friday!
-T.Jhozel
My favorite music type is ballad.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Ballads are my preferred genre of music.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Ballads are my preferred genre of music.
When i want to take some rest or feel tired, l usually listen to ballad.
>> Correct! (Just remember to use proper capitalization.)
>> When I want to take some rest or feel tired, l usually listen to ballad.
>> When I want to take some rest or feel tired, l usually listen to ballad.
Because that music type is not noisy and not making me confuse.
>> Because that particular style of music is not distracting or noisy.
Actually i like listening to active music.
>> Actually, I enjoy listening to upbeat music.
But when my condition is not good, the ballad is the best.
>>However, the ballad works best when I\'m not feeling well.
through this, l can make my feeling good.
>> I can improve my mood by doing this.
Nowadays l think the Rap is also good genre.
>> Recently, I think that the rap genre is also good.
>> Recently, I think that the rap genre is also good.
When l was elementary school student, l thought that is too fast to understand.
>> When I was in elementary school, I thought it was too fast to understand.
But ater being middle school student, l c[이름]ged my tought.
>>However, after entering middle school, I c[이름]ged my perspective.
It was fun enough to enjoy with my friends.
>>However, after entering middle school, I c[이름]ged my perspective.
It was fun enough to enjoy with my friends.
>> It was enjoyable enough for me to share with my friends.
And also l like to try other music types.
And also l like to try other music types.
>>I also enjoy trying out different kinds of music.
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