My favorite musical is \"The phantom of the opera\"
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My favorite musical is \"The phantom of the opera\". In this opera, there is a very wonderful songs. My favorite song in this opera is \"The phantom of the opera(this is the song of this opera, don\'t be confusing*^^*)\". Actually, when I was 6th grade, I don\'t know about opera also I don\'t know what it is, but when I became 2nd grade of middle school, I started to get interested in music, then I started to get interested in opera by myself. \"The phantom of the opera\" is my favorite opera, because I love at this story like \"Beauty and the Beast\", also I love this songs. The music of \"The phantom of the opera\" has a high note, but the famous Korea diva [이름] So-hyun sing this very hard music. That was very wonderful~^^
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Good evening Maria!
Indeed the Phantom of the Opera looks very mysterious and emotional one to see. I have actually seen some of the scenes but I only heard some of the songs and do not know the story fully. So tomorrow, kindly relay the story once again to me.
Thank you for sharing this and I hope that you can sing or play a little bit of the music that this play had in class.
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> My favorite musical is \"The Phantom of the Opera\". In this opera, there is a very wonderful song.
My favorite song in this opera is \"The phantom of the opera(this is the song of this opera, don\'t be confusing*^^*)\".
>> My favorite song in this opera is \"The Phantom of the Opera (This is the song of this opera, don\'t be confused.*^^*)\".
Actually, when I was 6th grade, I don\'t know about opera also I don\'t know what it is, but when I became 2nd grade of middle school, I started to get interested in music, then I started to get interested in opera by myself.
>> Actually, when I was in the 6th grade, I didn\'t know about the opera. Also, I don\'t know what it is, but when I became a 2nd grader of middle school, I started to get interested in music. Then I started to get interested in opera myself.
\"The phantom of the opera\" is my favorite opera, because I love at this story like \"Beauty and the Beast\", also I love this songs.
>> \"The Phantom of the Opera\" is my favorite opera, because I love this story like \"Beauty and the Beast\", also I love the songs.
The music of \"The phantom of the opera\" has a high note, but the famous Korea diva [이름] So-hyun sing this very hard music. That was very wonderful~^^
>> The music of \"The Phantom of the Opera\" has high notes, but the famous Korean diva [이름] So-Hyun sang this very hard music. That was very wonderful. ~^^
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