My favorite part about school
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I think my favorite part about school is lunch time. First of all, my school lunch is super delicious and they serve various kinds of dishes. Besides after eating lunch, I can even play tag or hide and seek with my friends in the schoolyard for a while. Most of all the lunch time is the longest recess while I’m at school. Playing time makes me feel energetic.
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T. DON
I think my favorite part about school is lunch time. First of all, my
school lunch is super delicious and they serve various kinds of dishes.
Besides after eating lunch, I can even play tag or hide and seek with my
friends in the schoolyard for a while. Most of all the lunch time is
the longest recess while I’m at school. Playing time makes me feel
energetic.
>> CORRECT!!! Keep it up!
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