My favorite part in my work
학생이 쓴 원문
It is important to find your own favorite part in work to maintain the job.
In my case, although the work such as planning the operation and navigating warship is hard and tough, i feel satisfaction from protecting our civilians and giving them security. If you don’t have a favorite part in your job, i cautiously recommend changing your job.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! Indeed, we need a job that makes us feel excited every time we go to work. If we enjoy our work, it doesn\'t feel like working at all.-Faith-
It is important to find your own favorite part in work to maintain the job.>> It is important to find your own favorite part of work to maintain the job.
In my case, although the work such as planning the operation and navigating warship is hard and tough, i feel satisfaction from protecting our civilians and giving them security.
In my case, although the work such as planning the operation and navigating warship is hard and tough, i feel satisfaction from protecting our civilians and giving them security.
>> In my case, although the work such as planning the operation and navigating the warship is hard and tough, I feel satisfied with protecting our civilians and giving them security.
If you don’t have a favorite part in your job, i cautiously recommend changing your job.
>> If one doesn’t have a favorite part of his job, I cautiously recommend changing it.
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