My favorite part of my city is seaside.
학생이 쓴 원문
My city is located in the west side of G[이름] gi do in Korea. So, my city abut the West sea. There are several ports and big marine products markets. Sometimes, my family go to there and enjoy seeing a view of the sea, having marine products.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju [이름]. Happy Wednesday! Your city sounds lovely. You are lucky.^^ The view must be beautiful from where you live. Thank you for sharing about your city. See you tomorrow in class. Have a great evening. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
My favorite part of my city is seaside.
>> My favorite part of my city is the seaside.
My city is located in the west side of G[이름] gi do in Korea.
>> My city is located on the west side of G[이름] gi do in Korea.
So, my city abut the West sea.
>> So my city is somewhere around the West sea coast.
There are several ports and big marine products markets.
>> CORRECT =)
Sometimes, my family go to there and enjoy seeing a view of the sea, having marine products.
>> Sometimes, my family goes there and enjoy the view of the sea while having marine products.
My favorite part of my city is seaside.
>> My favorite part of my city is the seaside.
My city is located in the west side of G[이름] gi do in Korea.
>> My city is located on the west side of G[이름] gi do in Korea.
So, my city abut the West sea.
>> So my city is somewhere around the West sea coast.
There are several ports and big marine products markets.
>> CORRECT =)
Sometimes, my family go to there and enjoy seeing a view of the sea, having marine products.
>> Sometimes, my family goes there and enjoy the view of the sea while having marine products.
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