My favorite place

2020-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Gabby, Did you have a nice day? I ate buckwheat noodle for lunch and I cleaned my house. After cleaning I feel good. My favorite place is ODongDo in YeuSu. I went adout 3 times to now. That is small a islet. It is connected of bridge. That is small a mountain and it is growing up many camellia. I think strolling road is very awesome. I can want to put it my neighborhood. Anyway it is my liking. Good bye Gabby! Foom Susan.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Great job for this composition. Keep it up!

- T. Gabby :)

Hi Gabby,

>> Correct.
Did you have a nice day?

>> Correct.
I ate buckwheat noodle for lunch and I cleaned my house.

>> Correct.

After cleaning I feel good.

>> I felt good after cleaning.
My favorite place is ODongDo in YeuSu.

>> Correct.

I went adout 3 times to now.

>> I went there 3 times already.
That is small a islet. It is connected of bridge.

>> It\'s an islet that\'s connected to a bridge.
That is small a mountain and it is growing up many camellia.

>> That is a small mountain where there\'s growing camellias.
I think strolling road is very awesome.

>> I think that strolling on that place is really awesome.
I can want to put it my neighborhood.

>> I hope it\'s just nearby my house.
Anyway it is my liking.

>> Anyway, I really like it.
Good bye Gabby!

>> Correct.
From Susan.

>> Correct.

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