My favorite place in my house
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My favorite place in my house is a little small area in the living room. There are a cozy couch, a piano and a bookshelves. I always play the piano and read books in there. I also love looking out the window sitting on the couch in there because I can see a beautiful city view through out the window. Additionally, my toys and Lego that I have made are being displayed. I really love spending my time in this area.
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T. DON
>> My favorite place in my house is a little small area in the living
room. There\'s a cozy couch, a piano and a bookshelves. I always play
the piano and read books there. I also love looking out the window
while sitting on the couch because I can see the beautiful city view
through out the window. Additionally, my toys and Lego that I have made
are being displayed. I really love spending my time in this area.
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