My favorite precious stone is pearl.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite precious stone is pearl, because pearl is my birthstone, and this stone means health, and riches and honors. There is a Garnet, Amethyst, Aquamarine, Diamond, Emerald, Pearl, Ruby, Peridot, Sapphire, Opal, Topad, and Turquoise. My mother, and father said: \"Our favorite precious stone is Diamond\". Also, my younger brother\'s favorite precious stone is Garnet, because he said: \"I like true and friendship, also Garnet is my birthstone, so I like it\". Actually, all of this stone has a precious meaning, so my favorite stone is pearl, and my precious stone is all of this.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Maria!
It is but natural that our birthstone is our favorite. Pearl symbolizes purity and represents a 30-year celebration in marriage or anniversary. So pearl has a lot of positive meanings.
For me, I love diamonds among precious stones. It is not a birthstone but if someone gives me that, I would definitely be the happiest person.
Thanks again for answering my question through this essay. Well done!
See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: My favorite precious stone is pearl because it is my birthstone and this stone means health, riches, and honor.
There is a Garnet, Amethyst, Aquamarine, Diamond, Emerald, Pearl, Ruby, Peridot, Sapphire, Opal, Topad, and Turquoise.
>> There is also Garnet, Amethyst, Aquamarine, Diamond, Emerald, Pearl, Ruby, Peridot, Sapphire, Opal, Topal, and Turquoise.
My mother, and father said: \"Our favorite precious stone is Diamond\".
>> Correct!
Also, my younger brother\'s favorite precious stone is Garnet, because he said: \"I like true and friendship, also Garnet is my birthstone, so I like it\".
>> Also, my younger brother\'s favorite precious stone is Garnet, because he said: \"I like being true and having friendship. Also Garnet is my birthstone, so I like it\".
Actually, all of this stone has a precious meaning, so my favorite stone is pearl, and my precious stone is all of this.
>> Actually, all of these stones have precious meanings. So my favorite stone is pearl, and my favorite precious stone is all of these.
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