My favorite present

I have been received present from family or friends like clothes,cake and accesory etc..Among them, my favorite present is money. Of couse I really happy to receive good present, but when I received money from my parents, I could buy something which I want to buy. So I was satisfied with my present. I think it is the most practical present.And if I can, I should make a beautiful envelope to convey money, and I'll give a present to others as money.

HI [이름], Oh, I agree with you this is very practical because you can buy the things that you really want or the things that you really needed. Here are the corrections. Take care and have a great night, Connie I have been received present from family or friends like clothes,cake and accesory etc.. >> I received many presents from my family and friends like clothes, cake, accessories, etc. Among them, my favorite present is money. >> Correct Of couse I really happy to receive good present, but when I received money from my parents, I could buy something which I want to buy. >> Of course, I’m really happy to receive good present but when I received money from my parents, I can buy anything that I want. So I was satisfied with my present. >> SO, I was satisfied with my present. I think it is the most practical present. >> Correct And if I can, I should make a beautiful envelope to convey money, >> If I can, I should also make a beautiful envelope to convey money. and I'll give a present to others as money. >> If I’ll give a present to others, it will also be money.