My favorite restaurant
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite restaurant is called NaeDdeRak.
They serve fresh vegetables and some boild meat.
The best dish that they serve quick-made freshly kind of salads.
They have been serving this community for many years.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]! I am really happy to see you in my class everyday :) Stay well ~
~Aki :)
My favorite restaurant is called NaeDdeRak.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> NaeDdeRak is my favorite restaurant.
They serve fresh vegetables and some boild meat.>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> It is my favorite restaurant because they usually serve fresh vegetable and some boiled meat.
The best dish that they serve quick-made freshly kind of salads.>>> The best dish that they serve is the quick-made freshly kind of salads.
They have been serving this community for many years.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> For many years, they have been in this kind of business.
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