my favorite ride in an amusementpark
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My favorite ride in an amusement park is the roller coaster.I like something fast with drops.I don\'t like boarding rides. It gives me a real thrill.that is why I like a roller coaster.
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HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite ride in an amusement park?
My favorite ride in an amusement park is the roller coaster.
>> CORRECT
I like
something fast with drops.
>> I like something that is fast and drops suddenly.
I don\'t like boarding rides.
>> I don\'t like boring rides.
It gives me a
real thrill that is why I like a roller coaster.
>> It gives me a real thrill that is why I like riding a roller coaster.
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