My favorite season
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite season is winter. Because there are four distinct seasons in Korea, I can enjoy winter sports like skiing. Also I love street foods in winter season. those are extremely hot and sweet. Another reason that I love winter is that I hate heat of the sun. Even though I am always waiting for summer because of ocean sports, sun screen and air conditioner are essential for me in summer.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
- T Gabby :)
My favorite season is winter. Because there are four distinct seasons in Korea,
>> My favorite season is winter. There are four distinct seasons in Korea.
I can enjoy winter sports like skiing.
>> Correct.
Also I love street foods in winter season. those are extremely hot and sweet.
>> Also I love street foods in winter season because those are extremely hot and sweet.
Another reason that I love winter is that I hate heat of the sun.
>> Another reason that I love winter is because I hate heat of the sun.
Even though I am always waiting for summer because of ocean sports, sun screen and air conditioner are essential for me in summer.
>> Even though I am always waiting for the summer because of ocean sports, sun screen and air conditioner are essentials for me in summer.
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