My favorite season

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Here are my corrections for you:

My favorite season is fall.

>> CORRECT!
This is because, I don\'t like not only too hot weather but also too cold weather.

>> This is because, I don\'t like only a weather that is too hot but I also don\'t like a weather that is too cold.
To be specific, the weather of the autumn has very calm weather rather than summer or winter.

>> To be specific, the weather of autumn has a very calm weather unlike summer or winter.
As for spring, it is warm and calm, too. But, I like cool weather more than warm weather.

>> As for spring, it is warm and calm too, but I like a cool weather more than a warm weather.
So, Fall is my favorite season.

>> So fall is my favorite season.