My favorite season and why

2010-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I like spring among four seasons, because the weather of spring is good, not cold and not hot.And almost things begin in the spring. Many kinds of trees and flowers start to bloom, little birds come in, and, as a new year begin,spring is coming. So I feel new atmosphere, as if I'll meet happy. I already expect next spring season. (hahaha) Thus, I like spring.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I'm happy to see this writing, it is a good start. I like spring too, specially the cherry blossom (^-^) and the colorful environment as well.  Here are the corrections. Stay safe, --Connie--   I like spring among four seasons, because the weather of spring is good, not cold and not hot. >> I like spring among the four seasons, because the it is good, it is not cold and it is not hot. And almost things begin in the spring. >> Most of the things begin in spring. Many kinds of trees and flowers start to bloom, little birds come in, and, as a new year begin,spring is coming. >> Many kinds of trees and flowers start to bloom, little birds flying and as the New Year begins spring also start. So I feel new atmosphere, >> Correct^^as if I'll meet happy. >> It makes me happy.  I already expect next spring season. (hahaha) >> I’m already looking forward to the next spring season. Thus, I like spring. >> Correct^^

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