My favorite season is..

2024-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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My favorite season is spring and fall two things. Big reason why, spring and fall is so warm weather and anywhere full beautiful color that korea or japan or other country.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

My favorite season is spring and fall two things. 
>> My favorite seasons are spring and fall.
OR >> I have 2 favorite seasons: spring and fall.
Big reason why, spring and fall is so warm weather and anywhere full beautiful color that korea or japan or other country.
>> The biggest reason why I love spring and fall is because it\'s so warm, and everywhere is full of beautiful colors, like that in korea or japan, or other countries.

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