My favorite season is...

What a hot day! Before talk about my favorite season, I want to tell My unhappy weather. I dislike summer because of hot, wet weather. The main reason why I don't like summer is I have an air-conditioningitis. Whenever I work, sleep and do something in turning on air-condation, I can't concentrate on that. Because I get severe headache and feel cold like winter. My favorite weather is fall. The weather is really good and My birth day is in september. In fall, I go hike every weekend. By hiking, I not only excercise but also make me relax. Sometimes, Because of strong sunshine, I get suntan. But it's not a big deal. Not too cold, not too hot is the best condition to do someting for me. What is your favorite weather Ms. [Name]?

Hi Ms. [이름]!   Thank you for doing your homework!You are very hardworking and you deserve a good price for it! Just continue believing in yourself and you will be successful soon! I know that you are an industrious person, and I salute you for that! I will see you in class and I will share you about my favorite season.   T. Kay ^^   What a hot day! >>Correct!Before talk about my favorite season, I want to tell My unhappy weather. >>Before I talk about my favorite season, I want to tell you my least favorite weather.I dislike summer because of hot, wet weather. >>I dislike summer because of its hot and wet weather.The main reason why I don\'t like summer is I have an air-conditioningitis.>>The main reason why I don\'t like summer is because I have an air-conditioningitis.Whenever I work, sleep and do something in turning on air-condation, I can\'t concentrate on that. >>Whenever I work, sleep, and do something while the air-condition is on, I cannot concentrate. Because I get severe headache and feel cold like winter.>>That\'s because I get severe headache and I feel cold like winter.My favorite weather is fall. >>Correct!The weather is really good and My birth day is in september. >>The weather is really good and my birthday is on September.In fall, I go hike every weekend. >>In fall, I go hiking every weekend. By hiking, I not only excercise but also make me relax. >>With hiking, I not only exercise but it also makes me relaxed. Sometimes, Because of strong sunshine, I get suntan. >>Sometimes, because of the strong sunshine, I get tan. But it\'s not a big deal. >>Correct! Not too cold, not too hot is the best condition to do someting for me.>>Not too cold and not too hot is the best weather condition to do something. What is your favorite weather Ms. [Name]? >>Correct!