My favorite season is spring
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My favorite season is spring. When i was young, I like going to picnic with my family in spring. Because when i go to picnic i learned about ride a bike for my father. This memory is very touched to me. Another point, after finished for picnic i go to restaurant with my family. It was very missed. So this reasons I like spring.
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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. CamilleMy favorite season is spring.
>> CORRECT!When I was young, I like going to picnic with my family in spring.
>> When I was young, I like going on a picnic with my family in spring.
Because when i go to picnic i learned about ride a bike for my father.
>> That\'s because when I went on a picnic with my family, I learned how to ride a bike from my father.
This memory is very touched to me.
>> This memory is a very touching memory to me.
Another point, after finished for picnic i go to restaurant with my family.
>> Another reason is that, after going on a picnic, I go to a restaurant with my family.
It was very missed.
>> I miss it very much.
So this reasons I like spring.
So this reasons I like spring.
>> These are the reasons why I like spring.
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