my favorite singer.

boa come back to korea. it's been in 5years. she became a singer at the first time, i also hate her. maybe people jelous her like me. s but now i proud of her. i awre that she is trying to be numberone. she's dancing powerful, and also she has powerful voice. she's now 24 years old. her nickname is Asian's star. i wanna be a korean star............. just kidding~~

Hello, Just like you I also envy peoplewho can sing well. My friends keep on telling me that I'm always out of tune. ^^ Anyway,  if I can't sing, I just listen to music. It is very relaxing. Take care! See you later! Thanks for doing your homework. Love, Verna boa come back to korea. it's been in 5years. >> It's been five years since Boa came back to Koreashe became a singer at the first time, i also hate her. >> At first I hate her as a singer.maybe people jelous her like me. s >> Maybe people are jelous of her like me.but now i proud of her. i awre that she is trying to be numberone. >> ButI'm proud of her now. I'm aware that she is trying her best to be number one.she's dancing powerful, and also she has powerful voice. >>She dance gracefully and she also has powerful voice.she's now 24 years old. her nickname is Asian's star. >> Correct (remeber to start your sentence in capital letters)i wanna be a korean star............. just kidding~~ >> Correct