My favorite song is Troye Sivan\'s .
학생이 쓴 원문
This song is very calm and fun, and it is a song that calms the mind, so it is a song that I play whenever I am sad or happy or when I go on a trip. Also, this song is very attractive, and there are dances with beautiful dance lines (for reference, BTS\'s Jimin and J-Hope once danced with this song). I tried to try too, but it was too difficult, so I gave up... ^^;; ha..ha...
The strength of this song is that it fits any situation or atmosphere no matter where you listen to it. I recommend listening to it at least once.
P.S. That picture is the scene where my favorite idol at the time, Jimin of BTS, receives a love call from Troye Sivan.
강사 첨삭
Hi Maria!
Songs that lift our spirit are the ones we need to listen to nowadays. I will listen to it when I get the chance to know the title. So can you tell me the title? Thanks for this homework answer once again. Truly, music is the melody in our hearts.
See you next week, enjoy your weekend!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Also, this song is very attractive, and there are dances with beautiful dance lines (for reference, BTS\'s Jimin and J-Hope once danced with this song).
>> Correct!
I tried to try too, but it was too difficult, so I gave up... ^^;; ha..ha...
>> I tried it to too, but it was too difficult, so I gave up... ^^;; ha..ha...
The strength of this song is that it fits any situation or atmosphere no matter where you listen to it. I recommend listening to it at least once.
>> Correct!
P.S. That picture is the scene where my favorite idol at the time, Jimin of BTS, receives a love call from Troye Sivan.
P.S. That picture is the scene where my favorite idol at the time, Jimin of BTS, receives a love call from Troye Sivan.
>> Correct!
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