My favorite Sports
학생이 쓴 원문
Basketball was my favorite sports during my highschool period.
I spent much time to play basketball at that time.
But my favorite sports was changed.
Soccer was booming in korea around the 2002 Worldcup held in Korea.
I began to play soccer with my neighbors.
and I felt a big interest in plying soccer.
From that time , Soccer has been my favorite sports.
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Hi there [이름]! Here are your corrections:-Teacher JM
Basketball was my favorite sports during my highschool period.
>>>Basketball was my favorite sport during my high school years.
I spent much time to play basketball at that time.
I spent much time to play basketball at that time.
>>>Correct.
But my favorite sports was changed.
But my favorite sports was changed.
>>>But my favorite sports had changed.
Soccer was booming in korea around the 2002 Worldcup held in Korea.
Soccer was booming in korea around the 2002 Worldcup held in Korea.
>>>Soccer probably boomed in Korea when the 2002 World cup was held in Korea.
I began to play soccer with my neighbors.
>>>Correct.
and I felt a big interest in plying soccer.
and I felt a big interest in plying soccer.
>>>and I felt a big interest in playing soccer.
From that time , Soccer has been my favorite sports.
From that time , Soccer has been my favorite sports.
>>>From that time on, Soccer has been my favorite sport.
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