My favorite subject.

When I was a middle school student, I like almost subject except gym and music. My song isn't corresponded original tune and beat. When I became a high school student, I like several subject. I became to hate math, English, science, "Chinese character". At that time, I thought that English is difficult and boring. Also I still don't like gym and music neither. Although I don't like "Chinese character", I like Chinese. Because Ancient of Korean used "Chinese character" so that subject, literature and history, of ancient times written in "Chines character". But we used "Chines character" differently from China. And the others of My favorite subject are literature, history written in Korean character, Hangul, and philosophy. Now I like philosophy, literature, psychology, and English.

Hi [이름],

Wow, this is impressive, you like most of the subjects. Actually, liking the

 subjects gives additional spice into your interest in studying. Keep it up.

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T. Connie J

When I was a middle school student, I like almost subject except gym and music.

>> When I was a middle school student, I like almost all of the subjects except gym and music.

My song isn't corresponded original tune and beat.

>> I can’t sing very well and it doesn’t correspond with the original tune and beat.

 When I became a high school student, I like several subject.

>> When I became a high school student, I like several subjects.

 I became to hate math, English, science, "Chinese character".

>> I eventually hated Match, English, Science, and “Chinese Characters”.

At that time, I thought that English is difficult and boring.

>> Correct^^

Also I still don't like gym and music neither.

>> Still, I didn’t like gym and music.
Although I don't like "Chinese character", I like Chinese.

>> Correct^^

 Because Ancient of Korean used "Chinese character" so that subject,

 literature and history, of ancient times written in "Chines character".

>> Ancient Korea used “Chinese Characters” in all subjects like literature, history and the like.

But we used "Chines character" differently from China.

>> However the use of “Chinese Characters” is different from China.

And the others of My favorite subject are literature,

history written in Korean character, Hangul, and philosophy.

>> Many of my favorite subjects like literature,

History, and Philosophy are written in Korean character or Hangul.

Now I like philosophy, literature, psychology, and English.

>> Now I like Philosophy, Literature, Psychology, and English.