My favorite summer activity.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I just like taking a rest on summer season because it’s so hot. Taking a rest, I usually watch Youtube or sports games and enjoy indoor activity. But if I should choose one, I like swimming the most. I do not swim well, but I like floating on water and just taking a rest.
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Hi, Jacob!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
Actually, I just like taking a rest on summer season because it’s so hot.
>> Actually, I just like taking a rest during the summer season because it’s so hot.
OR >> Actually, I just like taking a rest in summer because it’s so hot.
Taking a rest, I usually watch YouTube or sports games and enjoy indoor activity.
>> Taking a rest, I usually watch YouTube or sports games and enjoy indoor activities.
But if I should choose one, I like swimming the most.
>> CORRECT!
I do not swim well, but I like floating on water and just taking a rest.
>> CORRECT!
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