My favorite superherol

2021-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Incredible. 1. Save the people. 2. He has superpowors. 3. Because you\' re cool.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름] [이름]!
^^,)
You weren\'t very specific with your answer.
I rephrased some sentences. You can review this composition later.
I will see you in class, okay? Have a good day!

__T. Mayleen :)


Incredible.
>>> My favorite superhero are \'The Incredibles\'.
>>> OR: My favorite superhero is \'The Incredible Hulk\'.
1. Save the people.
>>> They save people.
>>> OR: He saves people.
2. He has superpowors.
>>> He has superpowers.
3. Because you\' re cool.
>>> I like him because he\'s cool.

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