My favorite teacher

2010-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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My best teacher was a mathematics teacher in a highschool. He was my homeroom teacher for 2 years. At first, I hated him so much because he always asked me some question in his class. When I didn't answer it corretly , he would scold me strictly. That's why I hated to attend his class. One day, the enonomic crisis happened in Korea. So my father got lost his job. A couple of months later , I heard a suprising news. The teacher recommned me for a scholarship. I was deeply moved about that. Though I don't keep in touch with him now, I think of him whenever I think back on my school days.

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Wow my dear [이름], Im really impressed with your composition..^^ You can definitely express your opinions and thoughts about a certain experience of yours way back highschool life.. Keep up the good work! Talk to you later.. T.Cam   My best teacher was a mathematics teacher in a highschool. >>correct!He was my homeroom teacher for 2 years. >>correct!At first, I hated him so much because he always asked me some question in his class. >>At first, I hated him so much because he always ask me some questions in his class.When I didn't answer it corretly , he would scold me strictly. >>correct!That's why I hated to attend his class. >>correct!One day, the enonomic crisis happened in Korea. >>correct! >>There was a time when Korea experienced economic crisis.So my father got lost his job. >>correct!A couple of months later , I heard a suprising news. >>correct!The teacher recommned me for a scholarship. >>correct! >>That teacher of mine recommended me for a scholarship.I was deeply moved about that. >>I was deeply moved by that.Though I don't keep in touch with him now, I think of him whenever I think back on my school days. >>correct!

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