My favorite teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
My best teacher was a mathematics teacher in a highschool.
He was my homeroom teacher for 2 years.
At first, I hated him so much because he always asked me
some question in his class.
When I didn't answer it corretly , he would scold me strictly.
That's why I hated to attend his class.
One day, the enonomic crisis happened in Korea.
So my father got lost his job.
A couple of months later , I heard a suprising news.
The teacher recommned me for a scholarship.
I was deeply moved about that.
Though I don't keep in touch with him now, I think of him
whenever I think back on my school days.
강사 첨삭
Wow my dear [이름], Im really impressed with your composition..^^
You can definitely express your opinions and thoughts about a certain experience of yours way back highschool life..
Keep up the good work!
Talk to you later..
T.Cam
My best teacher was a mathematics teacher in a highschool.
>>correct!He was my homeroom teacher for 2 years.
>>correct!At first, I hated him so much because he always asked me some question in his class.
>>At first, I hated him so much because he always ask me some questions in his class.When I didn't answer it corretly , he would scold me strictly.
>>correct!That's why I hated to attend his class.
>>correct!One day, the enonomic crisis happened in Korea.
>>correct!
>>There was a time when Korea experienced economic crisis.So my father got lost his job.
>>correct!A couple of months later , I heard a suprising news.
>>correct!The teacher recommned me for a scholarship.
>>correct!
>>That teacher of mine recommended me for a scholarship.I was deeply moved about that.
>>I was deeply moved by that.Though I don't keep in touch with him now, I think of him whenever I think back on my school days.
>>correct!
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