My favorite thing to do on my weekend
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My favorite thing to do on my weekend is travel. Hokkaido has vast nature, I enjoy this nature on weekend and holiday with my husband. Usually we depart after finishing the work on friday, ride on X-trail(the name of SUV), drive the night way, and arrive at Onsen for taking a shower. Hokkaido Has lots of Onsen, so we can use them always anywhere. After taking a relaxation in Onsen, we search the nearest Michi-no-eki(道の駅, Roadside station)and sleep in the car(In japanese Shachuhaku車中泊, meaning is Overnight in the car). In my car, two pillows and two sleeping bags are always prepared. But sometimes we stay in hotel. Next day, we departure to destination and real travel is started.
The other things to do on the weekend are swimming, watching animations and ARASHI’s concert DVD and so on.
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Hello Saki-San! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
My favorite thing to do on my weekend is travel. Hokkaido has vast nature, I enjoy this nature on weekend and holiday with my husband.
>> My favorite thing to do on the weekend is traveling. Hokkaido has a vast nature, I enjoy this nature on the weekend and on the holiday with my husband.
Usually we depart after finishing the work on friday, ride on X-trail(the name of SUV), drive the night way, and arrive at Onsen for taking a shower.
>> We usually depart after finishing our work on Fridays, we ride on X-trail(a kind of SUV), drive the night way, and go to Onsen to take a shower.
Hokkaido Has lots of Onsen, so we can use them always anywhere.
>> Hokkaido has lots of Onsen, so we can always use them anywhere.
After taking a relaxation in Onsen, we search the nearest Michi-no-eki(道の駅, Roadside station)and sleep in the car(In japanese Shachuhaku車中泊, meaning is Overnight in the car).
>> After having some relaxation in an Onsen, we search for the nearest Michi-no-eki(a road-side station) and sleep in the car or in Japanese we call it Shachuhaku, meaning; overnight stay in the car.
In my car, two pillows and two sleeping bags are always prepared.
>> In my car, I have two pillows and two sleeping bags that are always prepared.
But sometimes we stay in hotel.
>> But sometimes we stay in a hotel.
Next day, we departure to destination and real travel is started.
>> On the next day, we depart to our destination and the real travel starts.
>> The other things that we usually do on the weekend are swimming, watching animations and ARASHI’s concert DVD, and so on.
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