My favorite things about winter vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to go the ice link during winter vacation.
When I was young, I learned how to skate in a year. So I can skate very well.
I like to watch the movie in my home during winter vacation.
Watching the movie in my cozy blanket is so happy.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! It\'s good that you enjoy some activities during winter vacation. We will talk more about it in class. I will see you then! ~T. Lyn
I like to go the ice link during winter vacation.
>>I like to go to the ice rink during winter vacation.
When I was young, I learned how to skate in a year.
When I was young, I learned how to skate in a year.
>>Correct.
So I can skate very well.
>>Correct.
I like to watch the movie in my home during winter vacation.
I like to watch the movie in my home during winter vacation.
>>I like to watch movies at home during winter break.
Watching the movie in my cozy blanket is so happy.
Watching the movie in my cozy blanket is so happy.
>>Watching a movie under my cozy blanket makes me so happy.
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