my favorite toy
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my favorite toy is my new gromit doll. i bought it last wednesday in daegu. at that time, i was shopping at item shop and gromit caught my eyes. at first i decided not to buy it because it was too expensive. But the doll was so pretty that I kept thinking about it. finally i bought it!! now, i don\'t regret to buy it. this is sooo cute item. if i didn\'t buy it, this doll, i keep thinking about it.
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Hello, Stella!
T[이름]k you for your hard work and completing your homework.
I would love to see your doll! :D
See you tomorrow! ^^
-T.Jhozel
I think morning ismy favorite toy is my new gromit doll.
>> My new gromit doll is my favorite toy.
i bought it last wednesday in daegu. at that time,
>> I bought it last Wednesday in Daegu.
i was shopping at item shop and gromit caught my eyes.
>>I was shopping at the time, and Gromit caught my eye.
at first i decided not to buy it because it was too expensive.
>> I didn\'t buy it at first because it was too expensive.
But the doll was so pretty that I kept thinking about it.
>> But the doll was so lovely that I couldn\'t stop thinking about it.
finally i bought it!! now, i don\'t regret to buy it.
>> I finally bought it!! I don\'t regret purchasing it now.
this is sooo cute item.
>> This is a very cute item.
if i didn\'t buy it, this doll, i keep thinking about it.
>> If I hadn\'t bought it, I\'d be thinking about it all the time.
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