my favorite toy
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Before I started to play online MMORPG games by computer in fifth grade of the elementary school, I played offline games by computers from second grade to the fifth grade of the elementary school. Before then, I used to play with blocks with which I can make anything: from spaceships to buildings. I made one thing and made another thing with those blocks.
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>> Before I started to play online MMORPG games using my computer in fifth grade of the elementary school, I played offline games from second grade to the fifth grade of the elementary school.
Before then, I used to play with blocks with which I can make anything: from spaceships to buildings.
>> Correct.
I made one thing and made another thing with those blocks.
>> I made one thing after another with those blocks.
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