My favorite toys was clays.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite toy was clay, because clay\'s feeling was very soft, like a soft icecream. All of my friends favorite toy was doll. Brush there hair, dress up, put on makeup, but I don\'t like that. Instead, I draw it everything, then cut it, and glue it. Mabye that\'s why I like clay, because I can make everything! If I mistake I can fix it very well, and I can cut it very easily. Using clay I can make icecream, hamberger, black noodle(Actually...the food is most easy...I have a lot of work of art, but everything was food).
강사 첨삭
Hi there, happy weekend Maria!
Clay is a very good toy for kids and young ladies just like you. It exercises you imagination and lets you create objects of different shapes and sizes.
I hope you can show me in class your work of art using clay next week.
Thanks for doing your homework immediately President Maria!
See you next week. Take care.
-T. Donna =)
>> My favorite toy is clay because clay\'s feeling is very soft like ice cream.
All of my friends favorite toy was doll. Brush there hair, dress up, put on makeup, but I don\'t like that.
>> All of my friends\' favorite toy is a doll. They brush its hair, dress it up, and put on makeup but I don\'t like that.
Instead, I draw it everything, then cut it, and glue it.
>> Instead, I draw everything on it, then cut it, and glued it.
Mabye that\'s why I like clay, because I can make everything! If I mistake I can fix it very well, and I can cut it very easily. Using clay I can make icecream, hamberger, black noodle(Actually...the food is most easy...I have a lot of work of art, but everything was food).
>> Maybe that\'s why I like clay, because I can make everything with it! If I make a mistake I can fix it very well, and I can cut it very easily. Using clay, I can make ice-cream, hamburger, and black noodle(Actually, food is the easiest. I have a lot of work of art, but everything is about food).
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