my favorite traveling transportation.
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i really love using train for my travel. i love to have my own time. also i love to see the scenery. But the fact is i don\'t have enough money to use on my travel. and i can\'t go far on my feet. So l choose that way which i can enjoy alone and not expensive. And this is not dangerous. i really love the emotional of train. it is convenient to use train. i hope that l can go anywhere with train! i recommand this travel if you want to get some rest!
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Good morning, Stella ^^
T[이름]k you for writing your homework! See you later!
-T.Jhozel
i really love using train for my travel.
>> Correct. (always use capital letter I)
>> OR: I really enjoy traveling by train.
i love to have my own time. also i love to see the scenery.
>> I appreciate having my own time. I also enjoy looking at the scenery.
But the fact is i don\'t have enough money to use on my travel. and i can\'t go far on my feet
>> But the truth is that I don\'t have enough money to travel and I can\'t go very far on my feet.
So l choose that way which i can enjoy alone and not expensive. And this is not dangerous.
>> So I choose a way that I can enjoy alone, that is not expensive, and that is not dangerous.
i really love the emotional of train. it is convenient to use train.
>> I enjoy the emotional aspect of trains, and they are convenient to use.
i hope that l can go anywhere with train! i recommand this travel if you want to get some rest!
>> I hope to be able to travel anywhere by train; I recommend this trip if you need to rest!
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