My favorite tropical fruit is ‘mango’.
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My favorite tropical fruit is ‘mango’.
This fruit is more soft than other fruits, and it tastes sweet.
As well as its’ texture and taste, I like mango’s color, yellow.
I can\'t wait summer that I can eat mango.
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Hi Kara,
This fruit is more soft than other fruits, and it tastes sweet.
As well as its’ texture and taste, I like mango’s color, yellow.
Indeed, mango is famous among foreigners.
Lucky enough, Philippines has abundant supply of mangoes in summer.
Mango smoothie is really good!
Andrea
My favorite tropical fruit is ‘mango’.
>> Correct
This fruit is more soft than other fruits, and it tastes sweet.
>> This fruit is sweet and is softer than other fruits.
As well as its’ texture and taste, I like mango’s color, yellow.
>> Aside from its texture and taste, I like that it\'s yellow.
I can\'t wait summer that I can eat mango.
>> I can\'t wait for summer so I can already eat mango.
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