My favorite TV series!
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My favorite TV series is Kill Me Heal Me. The final episode of the series ends with the male protagonist Cha Do-h[이름], who had multiple personalities, treating his illness and walking his dog with the female protagonist Oh Ri-jin who helped him. This series was really sad, but I\'m happy that it ended with a happy ending. I especially like that Cha Do-h[이름] overcame the pain.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
My favorite TV series is Kill Me Heal Me.
>>> CORRECT!
The final episode of the series ends with the male protagonist Cha Do-h[이름], who had multiple personalities, treating his illness and walking his dog with the female protagonist Oh Ri-jin who helped him.
>>> The series\' final episode ends with the male protagonist Cha Do-H[이름], who had multiple personalities, treating his illness and walking his dog with the female protagonist Oh Ri-Jin who helped him.
This series was really sad, but I\'m happy that it ended with a happy ending. I especially like that Cha Do-h[이름] overcame the pain.
>>> This series was unfortunate, but I\'m happy that it ended happily. I especially like that Cha Do-H[이름] overcame the pain.
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