My favorite tvshow
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My favorite tv show is Giant Pengsoo.Pengsoo is actually the penguin’s name. I will say why I like this tv show. firstly,Pengsu does so many activities and play sports on the show. He challenges to guinese. Secondly Pengsoo has very cute voice and he looks really cute as well. Lastly most people know him but there’s nobody who have seen real him so I’m more interested in Pengsoo and I’m very curious about him and I really want to meet him in person.
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>> My favorite tv show is Giant Pengsoo. Pengsoo is actually the
penguin’s name. I will say why I like this tv show. firstly, Pengsu does
so many activities and play sports on the show. He challenges the genius. Secondly, Pengsoo has very a cute voice and he looks really cute
as well. Lastly, most people know him but there’s nobody who have seen him in face to face so I’m more interested in Pengsoo and I’m very curious about
him and I really want to meet him in person.
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