My favorite vacation

2021-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I was 23, I have been travel with my friend at Kotakinabalu Malaysia. During 2 week, that travel is my favorite memory. It\'s my first time in forever free trip. We were met so many friends, and ate delicious food. And just resting so cool with my best friend. I want to go back that time.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann:)

That sounds exciting!

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When I was 23, I have been travel with my friend at Kotakinabalu Malaysia.
>> When I was 23, I traveled with my friend to Kotakinabalu, Malaysia.

During 2 week, that travel is my favorite memory.

>> Our 2-week stay was my favorite.

It\'s my first time in forever free trip.

>> It\'s my first free trip.

We were met so many friends, and ate delicious food.

>> We met so many friends and ate delicious food.

And just resting so cool with my best friend.

>> I rested with my cool bestfriend.

I want to go back that time.

>> I want to go back to that time.

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