My favorite villain
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My favorite villain is Shen in a movie kung fu Panda 2. In fact he is a peacock. The first reason it’s my favorite villain is because he is super cool. It was so beautiful when he spreads his wings widely. Secondly, he fights against his enemies with fantastic skills. Everyone who has ever seen this movie would know he has amazing technical fighting skills.
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My favorite villain is Shen in a movie kung fu Panda 2. In fact he is a
peacock. The first reason it’s my favorite villain is because he is
super cool. It was so beautiful when he spreads his wings widely.
Secondly, he fights against his enemies with fantastic skills. Everyone
who has ever seen this movie would know he has amazing technical
fighting skills.
>> My favorite villain is Shen in the movie Kung Fu Panda 2. In fact he is a
peacock. The first reason it’s my favorite villain is because he is
super cool. It was so beautiful when he spreads his wings widely.
Secondly, he fights against his enemies with fantastic skills. Everyone
who has ever seen this movie would know he has amazing technical
fighting skills.
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