My favorite weather{02/26}
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I like sunny day more then rainy day.
Because rainy day is dry and cold.
But sunny day is warm and It\\\'s good for play.
I like playing side-and-seek, sabangchigi (You can see the photo) and ttangttameokgi(It\\\'s second picture).
It was so fun!
I like sunny day so~~ much!!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I appreciate your sharing some photos with me; they make your essay much more interesting, and thanks for sending your homework.
Cheers,
Jean~~
I like sunny day more then rainy day. Because rainy day is dry and cold.
>> I like sunny days more than rainy days because it\'s dry and cold when it rains.
But sunny day is warm and It\\\'s good for play.
>> But sunny days are warm and good for playing.
I like playing side-and-seek, sabangchigi (You can see the photo) and ttangttameokgi(It\\\'s second picture).
>> I enjoy playing hide-and-seek, sabangchigi (You can see the first photo) and ttangttameokgi (It\'s the second picture).
It was so fun!
>> It\'s so much fun!
I like sunny day so~~ much!!
>> I like sunny days so~~ much!!
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