My favorite website
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Usually I allways use Naver website.
It is Korean main poter search website.
Naver is most big company of the other search company.
But sometime, when I should send email to other country.
And then I used google.
Google is most famouse website of whole world.
But sometimes, when I used sending naver email to other country.
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Hi Ann:)
Those are really good applications and websites :) Thanks for sharing.
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Usually I allways use Naver website.
>> I usually use Naver.
It is Korean main poter search website.
>> It is Korea\'s main portal search website.
Naver is most big company of the other search company.
>> Naver is the biggest search company.
But sometime, when I should send email to other country.
>> But when I need to send an email to another country, I use Google.
And then I used google.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
Google is most famouse website of whole world.
>> Google is the most famous website in the whole world.
But sometimes, when I used sending naver email to other country.
>> But there are still times that I use Naver to send emails to people in other countries.
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